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From: Kidist Bremer Bennett <kbremerbennett@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, Feb 2, 2015 at 11:31 AM
Subject: AAA, DDD
To: seth weidenaar <sweidenaar@rcsnm.org>
1 Victor Doppelgänger of God... Everything he creates are evil. Opposite of good.--Good!
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From: Kidist Bremer Bennett <kbremerbennett@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, Feb 2, 2015 at 11:31 AM
Subject: AAA, DDD
To: seth weidenaar <sweidenaar@rcsnm.org>
1 Victor Doppelgänger of God... Everything he creates are evil. Opposite of good.--Good!
2 the thunderstorm lifts his spirit--sign on evilness
Failed to understand that because of his evilness so is his creation.
No one conceive the anguish he is feeling because no one is capable of that.
Has good quotes from the passage imagery and selected details are shown
3 yes it does an okay Job of covering and summing up his thesis.
4 score of 5
DDD
1 victory is having a feel of fear --- Okay thesis
2 uses quotation and selected imagery as well as allusion to convince readers
3 okay conclusion
4 score of 4
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Thank You!
-KBB.
Your analysis was great and the themes were correct. You also have some great evidence to back up your ratings.
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