Fwd: Shannon

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From: shannon begay <shannon14begay@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, Feb 2, 2015 at 11:40 AM
Subject: Shannon
To: seth weidenaar <sweidenaar@rcsnm.org>


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1) He is terrified and shaken and the reader can see that through the imagery, selections of details, hyperboles, and allusions Shelly provides in the passage. Rate: Short but good

2) the question for the essay was to characterize the narrator which is answered, and the writer adds the tools Shelly used for the reader. The essay uses text and the evidence is convincing.

3) conclusion sums up evidence and provides snapshot of all info.

4) 8 or 9

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1) Frankenstein is characterized as deeply feared or haunted making him appear agitated and distraught, almost like a crazy person. Answers question, but does not include the tools Shelly uses.

2) answers the question to the narrator's character, but does not have tools which displays the character in depth. There is a lot of evidence but doesn't have much of the writer's opinion. Evidence is convincing.

3) conclusion is really short but sums up evidence and provides a snapshot of info.