Thursday, February 12, 2015

Fwd: McKenzie Dunson

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From: "McKenzie Dunson" <kenziedunson@gmail.com>
Date: Feb 12, 2015 11:25 AM
Subject: McKenzie Dunson
To: "seth weidenaar" <sweidenaar@rcsnm.org>
Cc:

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1. Yes, this essay grabs attention by saying that there is a different, yet important, aspect of Frankenstein.
2. Yes, says that it makes use of romantic imagination that represents am aspect of Frankenstein well
3. Shows "evidence" by assuming the connection between promethius  and Frankenstein.

Body
1. Has okay transition sentences.
2. Shows evidence through summary and analysis.
3. Representation of the demoms and humans exposure to evil by the box. Demon was not evil at first but he has been exposed to evil by his creator.

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