Fwd: Your name

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From: "Chad Valdez" <cmv2487@gmail.com>
Date: Feb 12, 2015 11:19 AM
Subject: Your name
To: "seth weidenaar" <sethweidenaar@gmail.com>
Cc:

The essay of YY does not have a good first paragraph because there is no hook or evidence. The body paragraphs are good at presenting evidence and dwelling deeper.