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From: "Amanda Martin" <amandanmartin7810@gmail.com>
Date: Feb 12, 2015 11:25 AM
Subject: YY
To: "seth weidenaar" <sweidenaar@rcsnm.org>
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The intro paragraph answers the prompt and provides some evidence in analyzing the effect of the books cover.
From: "Amanda Martin" <amandanmartin7810@gmail.com>
Date: Feb 12, 2015 11:25 AM
Subject: YY
To: "seth weidenaar" <sweidenaar@rcsnm.org>
Cc:
The intro paragraph answers the prompt and provides some evidence in analyzing the effect of the books cover.
The body paragraphs both have good evidence and provide and explanation for the evidence they presented. However, there is no transition sentence from one paragraph to the next.
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