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From: "Shelby Peterson" <shelbypeterson17@gmail.com>
Date: Feb 12, 2015 11:23 AM
Subject: Shelby Peterson
To: <sweidenaar@rcsnm.org>
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JJJ
The first paragraph does grab the readers attention. It does answer the promt's question. It does prevent some evidence.
There are transition sentences in the essay. It does provide evidence that approves the opinion of having romanticism and the myth incorporated into the cover. The evidence is supportive with the man burning and the fire is swallowing them representing the nature incorporated for romanticism.
From: "Shelby Peterson" <shelbypeterson17@gmail.com>
Date: Feb 12, 2015 11:23 AM
Subject: Shelby Peterson
To: <sweidenaar@rcsnm.org>
Cc:
JJJ
The first paragraph does grab the readers attention. It does answer the promt's question. It does prevent some evidence.
There are transition sentences in the essay. It does provide evidence that approves the opinion of having romanticism and the myth incorporated into the cover. The evidence is supportive with the man burning and the fire is swallowing them representing the nature incorporated for romanticism.
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