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From: "Matthew Cope" <matthew.g.cope@gmail.com>
Date: Feb 12, 2015 11:26 AM
Subject: Matthew Cope
To: "seth weidenaar" <sweidenaar@rcsnm.org>
Cc:
Essay YY's introduction answers the prompt and provides initial evidence without the use of a hook. The body of the essay does not really have transition sentences, but it doesn't really need them because it is one paragraph. It presents good supporting evidence that connects the elements on the cover to the demon's experiences.
From: "Matthew Cope" <matthew.g.cope@gmail.com>
Date: Feb 12, 2015 11:26 AM
Subject: Matthew Cope
To: "seth weidenaar" <sweidenaar@rcsnm.org>
Cc:
Essay YY's introduction answers the prompt and provides initial evidence without the use of a hook. The body of the essay does not really have transition sentences, but it doesn't really need them because it is one paragraph. It presents good supporting evidence that connects the elements on the cover to the demon's experiences.
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