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From: Gilbert Charley <gilbertcharley@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, Feb 2, 2015 at 11:28 AM
Subject: Gilbert
To: seth weidenaar <sweidenaar@rcsnm.org>
From: Gilbert Charley <gilbertcharley@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, Feb 2, 2015 at 11:28 AM
Subject: Gilbert
To: seth weidenaar <sweidenaar@rcsnm.org>
FF
1. Mary Shelley gives the reader a very vivid and clear description of Victor being terrified and shaken through imagery, selection of details, hyperboles and allusions.
On a scale from 1-10 thesis gets 7
2. Writer quotes several times with supporting details for thesis. Evidence is convincing, the writing expands on all the thesis topics
3. Conclusion does sum up the evidence well, provides a snapshot of how Victor's attitude was portrayed.
4. 5-6
LLLL
1.Mary Shelley shows the characterization of Victor though imagery, detail and hyperbole
1-10 thesis gets 7
2. Essay does a good job of using quotes to elaborate on thesis. Evidence is convincing.
3. Conclusion could be better, but it does essentially sum up the evidence
4. 5
I agree with the LLLL analysis. But maybe a 6 for the overall score
ReplyDeleteThe thesis of FF is clear and the body of the essay gives enough quotation to convince the readers that victor is portrayed as terrified and shaken. The conclusions also sums up the idea of the thesis. I agree with the grade given by Gilbert.
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