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From: Amber Kruis <amberkruis12@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, Feb 2, 2015 at 11:31 AM
Subject: Amber
To: seth weidenaar <sweidenaar@rcsnm.org>
AAA:
From: Amber Kruis <amberkruis12@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, Feb 2, 2015 at 11:31 AM
Subject: Amber
To: seth weidenaar <sweidenaar@rcsnm.org>
AAA:
1. In a work filled with doppelgängers , Shelly alludes to the idea that Victor Frekenstein
Is himself God's doppelgänger
2. The evidence is really convincing. Quotes are used to show the evil side of Frekenstein.
3.the conclusion sums up the evidence well. Since they are the exact opposite they are doppelgangers
4. 8
DDD:
1. Mary Shelly wrote this passage wanting to feel the fear Victor is having.
2.quotes are used as evidence but hey are not too convincing.
3. The conclusions basically sates that Victor wants to be alone. It does an okay job of summing up the evidence. 4. 3
On DDD there really isn't a conclusion. Otherwise, good job. I wouldn't be quite so harsh, maybe 4-5.
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