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From: "Katrine Burke" <katrineburke@gmail.com>
Date: Feb 12, 2015 11:23 AM
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From: "Katrine Burke" <katrineburke@gmail.com>
Date: Feb 12, 2015 11:23 AM
Subject: Katrine Burke
To: <sweidenaar@rcsnm.org>
Cc:
Essay YY, interesting beginning, doesn't relaly grab my attention. Answers the prompt well. And gives evidence to prove their statement. Didn't have a good transition sentence between the body paragraphs. Evidence proves the opinion well. The essay has evidence that explains the opinion well and supports the idea. Overall, good job with writing.
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