Fwd: Christian Bitsoi

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From: "Jack Cayman" <kidriser7211@gmail.com>
Date: Feb 12, 2015 11:24 AM
Subject: Christian Bitsoi
To: "seth weidenaar" <Sweidenaar@rcsnm.org>
Cc:

Essay JJJ

It's grabs the reader 

It doesn't answer the prompt

No evidence; just picture detail

Does talk in clear and understandable sentences

Supported by the prompt

Has easy understanding sentences to generalize what the essay is about

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