Fwd: Temera N.

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From: Temera Nahsonhoya <tnahsonhoya@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, Feb 2, 2015 at 11:31 AM
Subject: Temera N.
To: seth weidenaar <sethweidenaar@gmail.com>


 Essay AAA

1) Thesis: sentence 1; average thesis, can be an answer but is not the best answer; Thesis says Frankenstein is characterized as God's doppelgänger.

2) Proof of thesis: "victor is in his own world where there is no power than himself, and all he creates and perceives is not good, but the opposite."

- does quote the text.

- evidence is convincing

3) Conclusion: sums up the text, restates info

4) 6

Essay DDD

1) Thesis: unclear, sentence 1; poor thesis, strays away from prompt; thesis says Shelly wants you to feel what Victor felt 

2) evidence is seen through imagery of hyperbole

-quotes are provided

-evidence is somewhat convincing

3) No conclusion

4) 3 or 4