Fwd: Shannon

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From: "Shannon Begay" <shannon14begay@gmail.com>
Date: Feb 12, 2015 11:25 AM
Subject: Shannon
To: <sweidenaar@rcsnm.org>
Cc:

JJJ

1st paragraph:
1) Does not have a hook which does not grab attention well.
2) Answers question clearly and thought out.

Body paragraphs:
1) Has transition sentences.
2) Has decent evidence using characters and symbols to represent the story


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