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From: Trace Montano <tracemont@icloud.com>
Date: Mon, Feb 2, 2015 at 11:27 AM
Subject: Trace
To: sweidenaar@rcsnm.org
AAA: 1. The first sentence. It's decent.
2. Evidence is good but this person is not talking about imagery, selection of details or allusion.
3. Short just not really feeling convinced
4. 5
DDD
1. The third sentence. Good to the point.
2. Good evidence and support. And of reference to the story. Convinced
3. Good conclusion even had a quote good summary
4. 8
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From: Trace Montano <tracemont@icloud.com>
Date: Mon, Feb 2, 2015 at 11:27 AM
Subject: Trace
To: sweidenaar@rcsnm.org
AAA: 1. The first sentence. It's decent.
2. Evidence is good but this person is not talking about imagery, selection of details or allusion.
3. Short just not really feeling convinced
4. 5
DDD
1. The third sentence. Good to the point.
2. Good evidence and support. And of reference to the story. Convinced
3. Good conclusion even had a quote good summary
4. 8
Sent from my iPhone
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