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From: "Gilbert Charley" <gilbertcharley@gmail.com>
Date: Feb 12, 2015 11:22 AM
Subject: Gilbert
To: "seth weidenaar" <sweidenaar@rcsnm.org>
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From: "Gilbert Charley" <gilbertcharley@gmail.com>
Date: Feb 12, 2015 11:22 AM
Subject: Gilbert
To: "seth weidenaar" <sweidenaar@rcsnm.org>
Cc:
1st paragraph
The first paragraph does not grab attention, although it does present evidence and it answers the prompt well
Body paragraphs
Essay does all criteria well, the essay supports opinions with evidence and uses transition sentences.
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