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From: "Amber Kruis" <amberkruis12@gmail.com>
Date: Feb 12, 2015 11:25 AM
Subject: Amber Kruis
To: "seth weidenaar" <sweidenaar@rcsnm.org>
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The first paragragh does answer the promt and provide evidence, however,it doesnt necessarily grab the readers attention.
From: "Amber Kruis" <amberkruis12@gmail.com>
Date: Feb 12, 2015 11:25 AM
Subject: Amber Kruis
To: "seth weidenaar" <sweidenaar@rcsnm.org>
Cc:
The first paragragh does answer the promt and provide evidence, however,it doesnt necessarily grab the readers attention.
The body paragrapgs do use transition sentences and do a good job of providing evidence to back up the essays opinion. The evisence supports the opinion by goving direct exaples of the relation between elemets in the drawing and element in FRANKENSTEIN.
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