Fwd: Katrine Burke

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From: Seth Weidenaar <sweidenaar@rcsnm.org>
Date: Mon, Feb 2, 2015 at 1:13 PM
Subject: Fwd: Katrine Burke
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From: Katrine Burke <katrineburke@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, Feb 2, 2015 at 11:26 AM
Subject: Katrine Burke
To: sweidenaar@rcsnm.org

Essay FF
1. The first sentence is the thesis.
2. Each paragraph gives proof towards the thesis.
3. A quote in each paragraph
4. Evidence is convincing.
5. The conclusion sums up the essay nicely.
6. On a 1-9 scale, the essay scores a 6.

Essay LLLL
1. The thesis is the first sentence
2. The thesis is proved in the body paragraphs.
3. Quotes in each paragraph
4. Wonderfully convincing
5. Only had one sentence ad the conclusion. Doesn't sum the essay up.
6. Scored a 5 on a 1-9 scale.