Fwd: Essay grading

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From: Amanda Martin <amandanmartin7810@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, Feb 2, 2015 at 11:41 AM
Subject: Essay grading
To: seth weidenaar <sweidenaar@rcsnm.org>

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1. Mary Shelly's Frankenstien shows that characterization of the narrator, Victor Frankenstien, through imagery, detail, and hyperbole.

This thesis simple restates the prompt and doesn't even answer it the "how?" Needs more depth into how the author uses imagery, detail, and hyperbole.

2. Uses quotes "I perceived in the gloom a figure which stole from behind a clump of trees..."

Yes evidence is convincing

3. Yes. Shows the audience Victor's characterization through imagery then reliving his madness through his reactions.

 

4. 6 

FF

1. Mary Shelly gives the reader a very vivid and clear description of the narrator. It is terrified and shaken and the reader can see that through the imagery, selection of detail, hyperboles, and allusions Shelly provides in the passage. 

Very good thesis!!

2. Uses plenty do quotes 

Yes convincing

3. Good conclusion

4. 9