Fwd: Nolan Johnny

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From: "Nolan Johnny" <nolanjohnny01@gmail.com>
Date: Feb 12, 2015 11:23 AM
Subject: Nolan Johnny
To: "sweidenaar" <sweidenaar@rcsnm.org>
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1st Paragraph:

1. The essay doesn't really grab attention but does answer the prompt and presents evidence: 

Body Paragraphs:

1. I'm not sure if there is a transition sentence. (Help??) 

    The body paragraphs show evidence by explaining Pandora's box and he's it connects to the demon and what the demon is exposed to. It explains how the demon was initially good but changed because of exposure.