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From: Shelby Peterson <shelbypeterson17@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, Feb 2, 2015 at 11:32 AM
Subject: Shelby Peterson
To: sweidenaar@rcsnm.org
AAA
1. In a work filled with doppelgängers, Shelley alludes to the idea that Victor Frankenstein is himself God's doppelgänger. This thesis is good.
2. The thunderstorm is "beautiful yet terrific" storm lifted Victors spirits. First sight he is an evil creator since he created something evil.
"No one can conceive the anguish I suffered during the remainder of the night" putting himself above everyone else.
It is convincing
3. It does sum up the evidence- he is evil/ created evil thing. God is good and and his creation is good.
4. 7
DDD
1. Shelley shows just how afraid Victor is of this monster and how much he loathes it
2." This noble war in the sky elevated my spirits" he is frightened
Describes how gigantic and grotesque the monster is- afraid
"I had turned loose into the world and deprived wrath whose delight was in carnage and misery." Miser
Some quotes
Is somewhat convincing but not great explanations
3. No conclusion
4. 5
From: Shelby Peterson <shelbypeterson17@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, Feb 2, 2015 at 11:32 AM
Subject: Shelby Peterson
To: sweidenaar@rcsnm.org
AAA
1. In a work filled with doppelgängers, Shelley alludes to the idea that Victor Frankenstein is himself God's doppelgänger. This thesis is good.
2. The thunderstorm is "beautiful yet terrific" storm lifted Victors spirits. First sight he is an evil creator since he created something evil.
"No one can conceive the anguish I suffered during the remainder of the night" putting himself above everyone else.
It is convincing
3. It does sum up the evidence- he is evil/ created evil thing. God is good and and his creation is good.
4. 7
DDD
1. Shelley shows just how afraid Victor is of this monster and how much he loathes it
2." This noble war in the sky elevated my spirits" he is frightened
Describes how gigantic and grotesque the monster is- afraid
"I had turned loose into the world and deprived wrath whose delight was in carnage and misery." Miser
Some quotes
Is somewhat convincing but not great explanations
3. No conclusion
4. 5
Explanation of aaa is done well because the essay is well written. The essay does elaborate on the ideas of doppelgängers and using imagery. Essay deserves a 7
ReplyDeleteExplanation of DDD is also well done because this essay delves into the fear victor is feeling. The essay does a good job of using imagery, but doesn't elaborate. Essay deserves a 5
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